Wild guesswork here. Ok. a e f H M o (italic? maybe?) L W Q a k g. The lack of borders is kinda throwing me off. For a second, I thought the middle one on row 2 was a 'V', then I realized that stem to the right was part of it too. Not too familiar with this font. Nice job, though.
I agree with what was said above. I think it might be a little more effective if you add the border to each letter. I think your strongest cropping compositions are the last 6. These are definitely your most sever crops and work for this assignment.
Wild guesswork here. Ok. a e f H M o (italic? maybe?) L W Q a k g.
ReplyDeleteThe lack of borders is kinda throwing me off. For a second, I thought the middle one on row 2 was a 'V', then I realized that stem to the right was part of it too. Not too familiar with this font. Nice job, though.
Umm... a,e,f,H,M,o,L,W,Q,a,K,g
ReplyDeleteI agree with what was said above. I think it might be a little more effective if you add the border to each letter. I think your strongest cropping compositions are the last 6. These are definitely your most sever crops and work for this assignment.
a e f h M o L W G a K g
ReplyDeleteLike the two above said, the last 6 are great and very effective. I think you could zoom in on the a and e since they are easily distinguishable.
a e f H M o L W Q a K g
ReplyDeleteI think you did a good job the only thing i would say is that the "o" could be an "e" because of how you angled it but your croppings look good.
the letter next to the k confuses me, i do think the boxes make things clearer for the reader to understand
ReplyDeletecrop the first row more or move them more off the page. -- andrea
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ReplyDeleteHM, italic o?
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italic a or i?, kg
I think you could crop a little more off, especially the top row, like Andrea said, and maybe a little off of the W, Q, and k.