I gotta be honest.. I LIKE YOUR LAST ONE!! It's just so damn bright and I love that. I like how you got that part of the 'a' highlighted also. I'm not quite loving that pea green in the middle composition. It kinda makes the 'L' less visible.. I think if you lightened that green a little it would look nice. I also like your top comp a lotttt. It kinda looks like some of mine. the ! inside the ? looks cool.. it took me a while to notice it but I like it. I really like the scale on it too. :)
I have to say i like your 3rd composition the best, the color scheme is bright and catches the eye and i like how you used different colors on your characters to show the uniqueness of that specific letter.
The middle composition is definitely your strongest. The colors also work very well all throughout the piece. The last one is fairly strong too, but maybe try using the palette that you used for the middle poster. You have some really strong concepts in each one, but I definitely favor your middle one!
The first composition is the most succesful in my opinion. One of the aspects that makes it stand out from others, is the way you used your dashed lines. The second composition is succesful also, The last composition's color scheme is too upfront. But i think you used a clear hiarchy.I think i would like it better if the colors were more subtle, but you know how i am i dont like to use any strong chroma. Nice work friend!
I really like how you did the A in the third layout. Even though the layout is pretty simple I think it works well because you have details for each letter that adds interest. I think this applies to the second poster too!
I really like the double letters in the second poster. It really puts hierarchy into perspective. The white lines on the first poster are a little distracting. Maybe making them fade back a little would help.
I gotta be honest.. I LIKE YOUR LAST ONE!! It's just so damn bright and I love that. I like how you got that part of the 'a' highlighted also. I'm not quite loving that pea green in the middle composition. It kinda makes the 'L' less visible.. I think if you lightened that green a little it would look nice. I also like your top comp a lotttt. It kinda looks like some of mine. the ! inside the ? looks cool.. it took me a while to notice it but I like it. I really like the scale on it too. :)
ReplyDeleteI have to say i like your 3rd composition the best, the color scheme is bright and catches the eye and i like how you used different colors on your characters to show the uniqueness of that specific letter.
ReplyDeleteThe middle composition is definitely your strongest. The colors also work very well all throughout the piece. The last one is fairly strong too, but maybe try using the palette that you used for the middle poster. You have some really strong concepts in each one, but I definitely favor your middle one!
ReplyDeleteThe first composition is the most succesful in my opinion. One of the aspects that makes it stand out from others, is the way you used your dashed lines. The second composition is succesful also, The last composition's color scheme is too upfront. But i think you used a clear hiarchy.I think i would like it better if the colors were more subtle, but you know how i am i dont like to use any strong chroma. Nice work friend!
ReplyDeleteI really like how you did the A in the third layout. Even though the layout is pretty simple I think it works well because you have details for each letter that adds interest. I think this applies to the second poster too!
ReplyDeleteI really like the double letters in the second poster. It really puts hierarchy into perspective.
ReplyDeleteThe white lines on the first poster are a little distracting. Maybe making them fade back a little would help.