I really like the music that has been added into the beginning of your Flash animation. It makes it fun and lets the viewer want to keep going through your piece. I also think that you have a very good amount of description and focus a good amount attention on the font and the characteristics. This is really good and It made me realize that I need to focus more on font rather than the other aspects of my animation. You did a really good job with interaction and keeping the viewer interested!
your music is form the Office!? right? I like how you came up with the theme of abbreviations or AIM talk, Very unique. I like how your buttons are the parts of the letter, I took a while to click them but other than that they work well. The story of the boy and the girl work well with the typeface and the theme of your movie. Good job making it interactive with the viewer!
Lauren, Good Job. I like how you incorporated the buttons and then used each to teach the viewer about the font. The beginning was confusing until I found out how to navigate it. If you tried directing the viewer on how to interact with your animation, it might flow more smoothly. A simple introduction or putting type such as, "click here" would work easily. Otherwise, I think your concept was planned out nicely and you really focused on what makes your font unique.
The colors are great but I think that you should make the buttons pop up much quicker. I feel constrained as I wait for every button to actually show up. Overall, a very unique and great job!
The interactive quality of you animation made it very interesting to watch! I also think that the humor used makes it easy to remember the unique qualities of the font.
You already have 5 comments. That is lame. I love the office music. Great choice. I don't like that because I take to long to click a button the song runs out :( sad day. I enjoy it though. Good concept
I really like the music that has been added into the beginning of your Flash animation. It makes it fun and lets the viewer want to keep going through your piece. I also think that you have a very good amount of description and focus a good amount attention on the font and the characteristics. This is really good and It made me realize that I need to focus more on font rather than the other aspects of my animation. You did a really good job with interaction and keeping the viewer interested!
ReplyDeleteyour music is form the Office!? right? I like how you came up with the theme of abbreviations or AIM talk, Very unique. I like how your buttons are the parts of the letter, I took a while to click them but other than that they work well. The story of the boy and the girl work well with the typeface and the theme of your movie. Good job making it interactive with the viewer!
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ReplyDeleteGood Job. I like how you incorporated the buttons and then used each to teach the viewer about the font. The beginning was confusing until I found out how to navigate it. If you tried directing the viewer on how to interact with your animation, it might flow more smoothly. A simple introduction or putting type such as, "click here" would work easily. Otherwise, I think your concept was planned out nicely and you really focused on what makes your font unique.
The colors are great but I think that you should make the buttons pop up much quicker. I feel constrained as I wait for every button to actually show up. Overall, a very unique and great job!
ReplyDeleteThe interactive quality of you animation made it very interesting to watch! I also think that the humor used makes it easy to remember the unique qualities of the font.
ReplyDeleteYou already have 5 comments. That is lame.
ReplyDeleteI love the office music. Great choice. I don't like that because I take to long to click a button the song runs out :( sad day. I enjoy it though. Good concept
Moved along nicely plus really cute concept!
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